Very plotty and enjoyable. Well done indeed! Loving the fact that Jack acted without thinking things through. It makes a wonderful parallel to how Jack ended up in his own predicament in the first place. And the promise of this not being over is one I hope is fulfilled!
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ninetydegrees
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on 2008-10-09 06:30 am (UTC)